Hi, it’s me again! I just want to share my work to you. You can criticize it if you want! Everything that u guys told me help me and shaped me for who i am right now. I personally thanks our forum legend @NgTrung as he was the first one to point out what i need to improve. These are my renders now, enjoy <33
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Hello @22-01854 , Have nice day 
I’m sorry for the late response as I had several tasks to handle. First of all, I’m very impressed with the first three exterior images—especially the third one, which really surprised me. Overall, the camera angles, lighting, and quality have improved a lot compared to before—you’ve made great progress.
However, the composition and interior lighting still need some adjustments to make them better. For the interior, you can add some lights to create a soft glow, but make sure they don’t stand out more than the environmental lighting. In addition, the sun shadows look a bit sharp—please try increasing the ‘sun radius’ to soften them. Also, please adjust the exterior trees in the fourth scene to make them look more visually appealing. The third exterior image is quite good.
I sincerely appreciate your effort and dedication.
Best regards.
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THANK YOU! I will do that and keep on improving!
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Keep up the good work and continue to improve — it will help you progress continuously. I’ll always be here to support you whenever you need.
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Hi @22-01854
The images you have provided are better! What I would like to point out is perhaps the composition of the vegetation.
- Try to have your vegetation assets, most especially the bamboos or trees to have it in random sizing, rotation, etc. This will make it look more natural.
- A better landscape composition will improve your work further!
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hello @clovisbolasco14 , i also want to thank you as you were the one who taught me how to angle my shots properly! It was actually my first time vegetations and that was a great advice! i would apply that to my next work and make sure to make it look natural. Thank you!
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