**Theme:**Engawa House
**Artist:**3Dfine
**Graphics Card:**RTX 3080
**Workflow:**Form Z D5 Render DaVinci
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The engawa concept embodies a key idea in Japanese design: the blurring of boundaries between inside and outside. It’s not fully interior, not fully exterior—more of an in-between zone where you can sit, observe the garden, feel the breeze, or watch the rain without being exposed to it.
This project reinvented it in a modern way. It is located in in southern part of Chile.
Any critic and comments are greatly apreciated.
Sebastien
Hi s.bernard,
I like the video, it’s well-crafted.
Here are a few ideas from me.
The sound of the waves and the cries of the seagulls
are too loud and too frequent, I would remove them entirely.
The video is a bit too long.
The perspective should be changed more often,
for example, between close-up and wide shots.
Variations in the animation’s movement would
make the video feel more lively.
I would incorporate speed ramping from one
point of view to another.
I hope you take these comments as they’re meant—
as well-intentioned food for thought.
I actually like the video as it is right now.
Bye
Andreas
Hi Andreas,
thanks for your comments and critics as you say they are food for the thought and base for further improvement. Where I can absolutly agree with your comments is that I should work more on the pacing and the shots angle and movement for my next project.
About the birds I guess it’s about personal taste. So one can’t get it right for everybody I guess… 
Thanks
SĂ©bastien
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Beautiful… very good, I loved it. Where can I buy or download the file?
You can buy a basic model on CG trader but what you saw is semly modified.