Theme: Beach Hotel
Artist: Lucas Castro
Graphics Card: Rtx 3060 Ti
Workflow: Sketchup + D5 + Ps
Whether the model is original: Yes
Model source: Client’s project
Description of the work: Beach hotel in Brazil (1-2 days of work)
Critics and comments are welcome
Hi lucascastro,
nice job! Especially in such a short time:). I like soft warm sunset vibe and camera angles you picked. Design is interesting as well.
The worst one for me is the last one, perhaps it is too faded, more hdr on sky and some randomness to loungers and it would be better. Some of the trees in building are in the same position, they need some difference.
What’s more I think that wood texture is too repetitive and some greenery is too dark (in front of wood wall). I would add people and some basic furniture from the assets. I think also that car paint is too reflective. I would add also DOF.
Keep it up! I would make modifications that I mentioned above and it is a good stuff for portfolio 
Amazing critics brother! I totally agree will all of that and will do the changes.
Since it was supposed to be a quick paid job, I indeed did some workarounds like in the wood and probably didnt change my clients model enought (didnt add round corners and so on).
I’ll do as suggested and eventually post again! thanks mate!!
Thanks, no problem
I know that some of the stuff I wrote is due to short time.
Post some updates 
Good work.
The lighting mood is very good.
The building is beautifully staged.
Maybe a bit of interior is missing.
I don’t think the first picture is that successful, because the right part is difficult to understand. Much confused.
My favorite is the third picture. This is outstanding.
I would just change the foreground, but that’s a matter of taste.
totally agree!
I will eventually add some interior and follow yours and f-light’s suggestions.
The client was thrilled and happy even with no interior (she’s the designer and didnt add anything inside as it was a first concept job) but you are right, it lacks some curtains and some stuff inside! thanks mate
