Animation Brazillian House

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Theme: House
Artist: Wesley Torres
Graphics Card: RTX 4090
Workflow: Revit + D5 render
Brief description of post-processing: Zero
Whether the model is original: authorial
Description of the work: Residential proposal under development

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Animation very nice, good job

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Beautiful work Wesley, well done!

It looks similar to the Lumion scene in terms of the setting and placement :smiley: (But yours is way better!)

Few comments:
-. it feels like the grey plaster wants to have a bit more bump? perhaps increase slightly the scale of that material so the grain is more visible, at the moment looks smooth like a baby butt.
-. it feels off to have all the house artificial lights fighting with the natural light, I would turn off all the lights and keep only the ones in the carpark, so you make emphasis on the cars if thats what you want, also perhaps one incidental light on the interior/rooms only.
-. Repetition of plants on the left west side of the image next to the grey wall very noticiable.
-. You can include some fog effect to add depth to the image, perhaps starting at the middle of the house or behind it.
-. not sure about the context but it feels lonely perhaps some buildings on the distance, if the case is there is no buildings visible then some extra vegetation on the background wont hurt.
-. Beautiful closing scene for the animation, try with a blue nigh sky/sunset HDRI and again fog so it creates this mystical/magical closure, also you can bring all the artificial light back again for this scene.

Great composition overall and use of materials, also nice how the tree line you use at the background merges very well with the scene vegetation.

Best,
Julio

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Thanks JulioPuccini, your comments are very important for my work, I will follow each one of them to improve the scene.

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You dont have to, Is just an observation for your future endeavors :wink:

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The animation is so well done that it is as if I have watched a complete story. If you add some vehicles, animals and people, perhaps we’ll see an another vivid life.

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